Chat Reject Suresh

Suresh Kumar Kalpala- REJECT
Please introduce yourself
[6:49:59 PM] suresh kumar: Hi sir, Its me Suresh Kalpala from Hyderabad.
[6:50:29 PM] suresh kumar: I have completed my MCA from Mallareddy college (College) of engineering
and technology in 2013
[6:51:20 PM] suresh kumar: Just now half and hour back we had a disscussion (discussion) about this
round.
Correct: We were discussing about the same 1.5 hours back.
[6:52:15 PM] Ranjit Mitra: okay
[6:52:18 PM] Ranjit Mitra: yes i remember
[6:52:30 PM] Ranjit Mitra: V?
[6:53:08 PM] suresh kumar: I watch the movie called "Ramleela".
[6:53:45 PM] suresh kumar: In this movie the co-stars Ranbir and Deepika played a good roles.
Correct: In Ramleela Deepika and Ranbir played good roles. (A is unnecessary)
[6:54:05 PM] suresh kumar: The movie is about a love story.
[6:54:26 PM] suresh kumar: It was directed by Sanjay Leela bansali.(Bhansali)
[6:55:11 PM] suresh kumar: Music reach to the peak.(reached or went )
[6:56:16 PM] suresh kumar: Especially the Dhol song, in this song Deepika tried put her all the effort.
Correct: In the dhol song, deepikas effort was appreciated by one and all.
[6:56:48 PM] suresh kumar: Sorry its Deepika tried and put her all the efforts
Correct: Sorry it is Deepika.(its is wrong , it is always it is)
[6:57:05 PM] suresh kumar: Sir are you there?
[6:57:17 PM] Ranjit Mitra: yes keep going
[6:57:22 PM] Ranjit Mitra: iam right here( this is wrong, it should be I am )
[6:58:15 PM] suresh kumar: Coming to Ranbir singh being a new actor who doesn't have a good
experince he
[6:58:22 PM] suresh kumar: performed very will
Correct : Coming to Ranbir singh, being a new actor who doesn't have a good experince he performed
very will
(Ranbir is 4 years old in the industry , band baja barat-2010)


[6:58:26 PM] suresh kumar: sorry
[6:58:28 PM] suresh kumar: well
[6:58:57 PM] suresh kumar: The romance between Ranbir and Deepika was vey good.
[6:59:21 PM] suresh kumar: Its (it is) a colourfull movie.(colorful)
[6:59:39 PM] Ranjit Mitra: anything else you want to share
[7:00:08 PM] suresh kumar: You can ask Ranjit sir
[7:00:25 PM] Ranjit Mitra: Tell me about your childhood days
[7:01:06 PM] suresh kumar: My childwood days is like very cool life which it wont come back.
Correct: My childhood days were memorable ,and they would not come back.(do not write wont . write
would not)
[7:01:58 PM] suresh kumar: Since i lived in Hostel in my childwood i used to remember a movie called
"Tare Zameen par".
Correct: Childhood
[7:02:14 PM] suresh kumar: Because this story is related to my childwood life
Correct: Childhood

[7:02:57 PM] suresh kumar: I used to stay away with my parents.
Correct: I used to stay away from my parents, (stay away with is wrong)(put a comma just after the
sentence completes)
[7:03:32 PM] suresh kumar: But i like the way they treat me when am back from my hostel for my
summer holidays
Correct: But, I liked the way in which my parents treated me when I was back at home from the hostel.
(Treated)
[7:03:54 PM] suresh kumar: They used to treat me so special than my brother.
[7:05:08 PM] suresh kumar: But we had a good experince (Experience) at hostel, and we maintain some
time sence.(absurd)
[7:06:33 PM] suresh kumar: Eveyday activities we used to do with out (without is a single word) absent,
like playing games, and the total time table is different (sentence does not make sense)
[7:07:49 PM] suresh kumar: We will be more challanging with my friends in studies and sports.
Correct: We were facing new challenges , and competed with my friends for studies and sports.
[7:07:58 PM] suresh kumar: Thats it sir
[7:08:34 PM] Ranjit Mitra: alright
[7:08:55 PM] Ranjit Mitra: My computer is not booting anymore. Would you like to suggest some steps
of troubleshooting to me to fix it
[7:09:43 PM] suresh kumar: First of all check with the plug wheather (whether) as(is) fixed in a correct
way.
Correct: Please check if the plug is put in the correct way.
[7:10:04 PM] suresh kumar: If not fixed well fix it correctly.
Correct: If it is not fixed, please fix it correctly.
[7:10:07 PM] Ranjit Mitra: it is connected
[7:10:47 PM] suresh kumar: Then you will be find a button with CPU click on it
Correct: Than ,please check with the Central Processing Unit.
[7:10:53 PM] Ranjit Mitra: done
[7:11:07 PM] Ranjit Mitra: what is cpu?
[7:11:14 PM] suresh kumar: Click on the option called start with a safe mode
[7:11:49 PM] suresh kumar: CPU is a big box kind of this beside your Monitor.
[7:12:00 PM] suresh kumar: kind of thing(kind of thing is vague , you are explaining someone something
,do not use kind of thing, be specific)
Correct: : CPU stands for Central Processing Unit. CPU is the hardware within a computer that carries
out the instructions of a computer program by performing the basic arithmetical, logical,
and input/output operations of the system
[7:12:04 PM] Ranjit Mitra: okay
[7:12:12 PM] Ranjit Mitra: why do you call it CPU
[7:12:46 PM] suresh kumar: The abbrevation of CPU is Central Process Unit.
[7:13:10 PM] suresh kumar: Its containts all the hardware parts in it.
[7:13:49 PM] suresh kumar: It orginates the connections between monitor and UPS and Sound systems.
[7:14:05 PM] Ranjit Mitra: okay
[7:14:30 PM] Ranjit Mitra: thanks for the information and your time. Please speak with the HR about
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