diet pills

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WRITING FORM 1 (DRAFT)

NAME: SEE YAN TENG

GROUP: 44

MATRIC NO.: 176507
TOPIC: Harmful Effects of Consuming Diet Pills Daily

Thesis
Statement:

Consuming diet pills may not only lead us to short term and minor effects but also long term and more
serious level.

Topic
Sentence:

Paragraph 1
First of all, consuming diet pills daily can cause
short term and minor effect to our health.

Paragraph 2
Secondly, long term and serious effects will occur when we
consume diet pills continuously.

Supporting
Points:

SP1: -consuming diet pill causes insomnia

SP1: -may get high blood pressure even though one already
stop taking diet pills

- loss appetite, feeling headache but restless
SP2: - one will become addicted to the diet pills
- feeling good when taking them

- lead to hypertension and even cause death
SP2: - lead to kidney and liver problem
- diet pills contain Diethylpropion that absorbs liquid
and release toxic in our body that lead to failure of
kidney

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Concluding
Sentence:

Therefore, insomnia and addiction are the common
short term and minor effects of consuming diet
pills.

Instructor’s Comments (for Instructors ONLY):

High blood pressure, kidney and liver problem are the long
term and serious side effects caused by taking diet pills.