Example: Milestone Two The following is an example of a Milestone Two submission.

Example: Milestone TwoThe following is an example of a Milestone Two submission. Note that this is only an example, so it may need to be revised in order to meet all of the Milestone Two requirements. Click on each blue highlighted area below to learn more about areas where the essay needs improvement. Feel free to refer back to the Milestone Two Guidelines and Rubric to consider how well this paper meets those guidelines. The following is an evaluation of the student's submision according to that rubric:Introduction, Artworks: 2 of 2 points possible (100%)Introduction, Argument/Idea: 1.5 of 2 points possible (75%)Historical Background, Relationship: 8 out of 8 points possible (100%)Historical Background, Influence/Shape: 9 of 9 points possible (100%)Similarities/Differences, Similar: 6 of 8 points possible (75%)Similarities/Differences, Different: 6.75 of 9 points possible (75%)Similarities/Differences, Express: 6.75 of 9 points possible (75%)Similarities/Differences, Represent: 6.75 of 9 points possible (75%)Modern Influence, Expression: 6 of 6 points possible (100%)Modern Influence, Influence or Define: 6 of 6 points possible (100%)Modern Influence, Learn: 4.5 of 6 points possible (75%)Modern Influence, Echo: 6 of 6 points possible (100%)Modern Influence, Archeytpe: 4.5 of 6 points possible (75%)Modern Influence, Parallels: 4.5 of 6 points possible (75%)Articulation of Response: 5 out of 5 points possible (100%)Total Points: 84.25 of 100 points possible for a B+ submission